Advice/Suggestions + Good breakout/action pictures?

[seany boy]

Please, just stop posting on this thread.

 

[Mikey15]

yer i totally with seany on this one let him do his own work he may be predicted an A but its not his A its not his work its all yours its not fair on others. I think seany was saying stop posting because of that?

 

[Big Mac]

yer i totally with seany on this one let him do his own work he may be predicted an A but its not his A its not his work its all yours its not fair on others. I think seany was saying stop posting because of that?

no

he was on about you

ill add what he missed out

mikey15 please, stop posting on this thread!





















muppet

 

[onasilverbike]

www.paintballpictures.co.uk

unless you use this site you suck

Word

 

[Chris Team I.C.E.]

NOT REALLY I JUST THINK THE TEACHER SHOULD STOP BEING A Pervert over the girls man .****ing enoying there dumb and there predicted a's/b's bull**** like one time we was doing simpsons stuff and a girl said yer cos barts best friend is nelson we where like errm no its not and sir thinks he such a simpsons fan he goes yes holly your absolutly right but i wont get an f cos sir said my works looking good anyway.

Are you serious?No one speaks like this do they?Yeah but,no but.......

Anyway-Proto I think you have done a pretty good job considering the first draft-looks much better now.Only thing that occurs to me is would be moving the PSP logo with the words around it a bit to the right-this way it doesnt overlap with the guys leg on the photo and make it a bit better balanced?Just my 2p,good job man.

 

[Will L]

Woh, I missed a lot. Mike they're right, calm down, theres no reason to post up how you feel about the teachers, grades etc... On here.

Dont think its classed as cheating as its just me asking paintballers who my mag will be aimed at, what they think of the magazine and how to improve it. I consider it research and developement (plus my teacher has seen me writing up the document on all these suggestions so I think its all good)

I did listen to you mike, and I made the results,pics and new releases straight instead of angled. I just didnt think it looked good, but they have suggested rearranging the whole layout of the pics and words, so I will see what that looks like.

Heres the version with the bold title.

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/3786/pressurefinalboldry7.gif

-Will

 

[RainbowShooter]

I hate to say it but, that's looking damn good.

 

[Chris Team I.C.E.]

Bold title much better in my opinion

 

[Will L]

I agree, it looks much better now

Pic of same but PSP section altered.
http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/2852/pressurefinalbold2sc7.gif

 

[Chris Team I.C.E.]

I think that looks slightly better with the PSP logo moved.In all honestly its being prettty pendantic though-looks about as good as its going to get i would guess!Nice job.Id pass ya!