Advice/Suggestions + Good breakout/action pictures?

[jknight15]

hmmmm your right but still in a way he aint really doing research he aint looking up stuff your all telling him it and telling him what to do with his front cover look at the transformation from the first front cover to last its totally different and is none of his ideas so therefore its not really his work.

Thats why its called Research and Development

He researched possible ideas from people, then used them to develop his work

 

[J@mes]

He is showing this thread to the teacher just showing when people say that looks good not when they say change this change that or the looks bit bad.

oh my......slow on the up take are we

he has not had any of the work done for him, no one has designed the cover for him, he has done all the work, he has used the suggestions (<--- thats all they where) and criticism to make his cover suite the target that his mag is aimed at.

-james

 

[Mikey15]

Thats why its called Research and Development

He researched possible ideas from people, then used them to develop his work

ok i cant be botherd in ways because im wrong and i think of it different to you guys so i cant be bothered to post no more as i have already gave myself a bad name.

 

[Mikey15]

oh my......slow on the up take are we

he has not had any of the work done for him, no one has designed the cover for him, he has done all the work, he has used the suggestions (<--- thats all they where) and criticism to make his cover suite the target that his mag is aimed at.

-james

NO he he put on his Word doucment stuff that people have said about the front cover he is not showing this thread he is copy and pasting when people say stuff like that looks really good. He is not copy and pasting stuff like i would say change this and change that to make it look better. Not showing what you guys have said to get a better front cover.

 

[Will L]

He is showing this thread to the teacher just showing when people say that looks good not when they say change this change that or that looks bit bad.

Actually I've put parts even where people have said the free gift thing looks tacky etc....

Im showing all the posts that have been suggestions, and I have been writing my own comments about them in the document. Even if they are comments against certain parts of the magazine, its all part of the project.

Of course I'm not showing the thread, because of all the off topic posts the techer/reviewer would have to filter through.

 

[Mikey15]

Actually I've put parts even where people have said the free gift thing looks tacky etc....

Im showing all the posts that have been suggestions, and I have been writing my own comments about them in the document. Even if they are comments against certain parts of the magazine, its all part of the project.

I was sitting next to you in media i didnt see anything like that.

 

[Will L]

Yes but you do not sit next to me at home. I've redone it more clearer and detailed since then.

 

[Mikey15]

Yes but you do not sit next to me at home. I've redone it more clearer and detailed since then.

since i menssion about it.

 

[Will L]

MODS - Feel free to pull this thread, ive got all the suggestions and feedback from people down in my R & D document.

 

[RainbowShooter]

Will, is he such a tart at school?