Advice/Suggestions + Good breakout/action pictures?

[pyroLX]

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/5265/pressurefinal2cmc4.gif

^^ Theres the initial version, you think I should make the text bigger than that?

I think that a bit bigger would work better.. but thats just me. If you dont like it I wont be offended

 

[Will L]

Ok, I think this could end up as being the final one to put forward for my front cover.

Bigger text now, and that idea is looking great. Thanks again. And would appreciate it if a mod wouldn't delete this once I'm finished with the cover, as I would like to get all of this down into a document.

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1825/pressurefinal2dem4.gif

-Will

 

[J@mes]

cover looks good, but the PSP part down the bottom right looks mis-match from the rest of the cover.

-james

 

[Mikey15]

Ok, I think this could end up as being the final one to put forward for my front cover.

Bigger text now, and that idea is looking great. Thanks again. And would appreciate it if a mod wouldn't delete this once I'm finished with the cover, as I would like to get all of this down into a document.

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1825/pressurefinal2dem4.gif

-Will

That looks pretty coool you as$hole

 

[Mikey15]

cover looks good, but the PSP part down the bottom right looks mis-match from the rest of the cover.

-james

haha you never listen to me i told you change the way they are make them strait.

 

[Will L]

Looking at it a bit more, I can see what you mean J@mes. But I really would like that logo to stay or any suggestions for an alternative?

 

[Mikey15]

Looking at it a bit more, I can see what you mean. But I really would like that logo to stay or any suggestions for an alternative?

i told you try it the way i said then post it and see what people say.

 

[Will L]

I think he was talking about the actual logo and the colours, but yeah. Ive tried it with the words around it straight and it doesnt look good at all. But I'll post it up anyway as it could just be me

 

[J@mes]

Looking at it a bit more, I can see what you mean. But I really would like that logo to stay or any suggestions for an alternative?

well the rest of the cover is pretty well balanced, i would suggest stopping for the night, and looking at it again tomorrow with fresh eye's. and maybe having a look at PGi covers, the covers are always balanced.

maybe a larger logo with the font running over it, or something like that.

-james

 

[Will L]

Guess I could do with a break. And Ill read over a PGi tonight.