Advice/Suggestions
Im doing a Media project in which I've decided to design a paintball magazine. I thought it would be good for the research stage of my project (and a few extra marks) to ask you, the paintballers, what you think of my designs so far. And what I could improve, such as layout, colours etc...
Rough Designs of front cover
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/2233/pressureroughlayout2pg9.gif
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/978/pressurerough6gm0.gif
(im still to add more articles on the front)
Final Design of front cover
http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/2852/pressurefinalbold2sc7.gif
Very newb picture on the cover, but all I had at the time. From way back at my first ever torny
Interview Article
http://img98.imageshack.us/my.php?image=joninterviewpage1orangeoh1.gif - Page 1
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/103/joninterviewpage2orangebc5.gif - Page 2
(Would like to add, this was a real interview with a team mate of mine, but some of the answers have been altered and some have been added in to 'spruce' it up a bit and make it more interesting, such as the mugging one and expecting to be picked for example, so do not think Jon has said all of these things, he gave me permission to add information and 'spruce it up'/make things up to make it a good read. )
EGO 8 Review + Tech Zone
Note: I have am not going to be able to review an EGO8 personally before the deadline so I based this on WPG EGO7 review aswell as various information from eclipse and others and edited it/added/removed bits (aswell as a few made up bits, its fake after all and for a teacher that knows nothing about paintball, if some of the facts are unrealistic or wrong it doesnt matter. Its fake.). I am in the process of asking permission (Eclipse for pics + info, WPG for use of info) although im sure they wont have a problem. If the pictures/info used are a problem I respect that and will remove them and the same goes for any other pages.
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5065/ego81stpageuy9.gif
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5976/ego82ndpagenu5.gif
News and Results
I based the design on PGi's 'Trashmouth' page.
Front Page inside advert (Work in Progress)
I am awaiting my new HPG top and will then take a picture of myself and edit it to be heavily shadowed. A little sad I know, took the idea from the various adverts of the likes of Ollie Lang , but is bound to get me a few marks
Contents Page
Again, got the idea from PGi, but tbh im not really liking it. Thinking about trying out something new.
Any advice/suggestions/help is greatly appreciated.
Thanks
-Will
Im doing a Media project in which I've decided to design a paintball magazine. I thought it would be good for the research stage of my project (and a few extra marks) to ask you, the paintballers, what you think of my designs so far. And what I could improve, such as layout, colours etc...
Rough Designs of front cover
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/2233/pressureroughlayout2pg9.gif
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/978/pressurerough6gm0.gif
(im still to add more articles on the front)
Final Design of front cover
http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/2852/pressurefinalbold2sc7.gif
Very newb picture on the cover, but all I had at the time. From way back at my first ever torny
Interview Article
http://img98.imageshack.us/my.php?image=joninterviewpage1orangeoh1.gif - Page 1
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/103/joninterviewpage2orangebc5.gif - Page 2
(Would like to add, this was a real interview with a team mate of mine, but some of the answers have been altered and some have been added in to 'spruce' it up a bit and make it more interesting, such as the mugging one and expecting to be picked for example, so do not think Jon has said all of these things, he gave me permission to add information and 'spruce it up'/make things up to make it a good read. )
EGO 8 Review + Tech Zone
Note: I have am not going to be able to review an EGO8 personally before the deadline so I based this on WPG EGO7 review aswell as various information from eclipse and others and edited it/added/removed bits (aswell as a few made up bits, its fake after all and for a teacher that knows nothing about paintball, if some of the facts are unrealistic or wrong it doesnt matter. Its fake.). I am in the process of asking permission (Eclipse for pics + info, WPG for use of info) although im sure they wont have a problem. If the pictures/info used are a problem I respect that and will remove them and the same goes for any other pages.
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5065/ego81stpageuy9.gif
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5976/ego82ndpagenu5.gif
News and Results
I based the design on PGi's 'Trashmouth' page.
Front Page inside advert (Work in Progress)
I am awaiting my new HPG top and will then take a picture of myself and edit it to be heavily shadowed. A little sad I know, took the idea from the various adverts of the likes of Ollie Lang , but is bound to get me a few marks
Contents Page
Again, got the idea from PGi, but tbh im not really liking it. Thinking about trying out something new.
Any advice/suggestions/help is greatly appreciated.
Thanks
-Will