the scarface side works (left side) other doesnt in my eyes. lose th cash on the feed neck as it looks cheap and tacky.
for right side i just think it looks like you came up with the left side and got stck for the right, i'd rethink the entire right side again.
yeah as for the the greys your have to sort that out or re cut it as the engraving doesnt do shades. (check out the Rage A1 for an example of Tony)
nice start but needs some rethinking. sorry to sound like an old bitch but i just dont want you engrave a marker that you end up regretting (bit like a tattoo in some ways
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